- what is the scar?
- i like how the author doesn't give the names away in the beginning, but lets you find out through the convo.
- i feel bad for piggy
- all the kids seem to be very calm for people that are stuck on an island. they seem like there just having a party or something and their just assigning jobs for people just because.
- i found it a little weird that all of the people on the island were boys.
- why was everyone getting naked?
- i think that everyone will be mean to piggy and then later on they'll find out he has some sort of magical power or just a good skill
Tuesday, December 4, 2007
chapter one
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yes something that you can try in your writing, especially your picture prompts. reveal information no through direct exposition, bu through dialogue.
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