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• i like how the author on page 34 has the characters talk about how their little adventure on the island was just like a book
• the dialogue is very realistic in the book. when they have their meetings everyone is talking over everyone else fighting for the right to talk, thats why i thought it was a pretty good idea to introduce the conch as a thing to allow people to speak especially with the smaller kids.
• i thought that the fire was made too quick, on man vs. wild it could take him hours. but i understand the author wouldn't describe an hour of the boys trying to make a fire.
• im proud of piggy for standing up for what he believes in. i think that the kids should listen to him because he sounds like he knows what hes doing and what the kids priorities should be. i also think that jack and Ralph are jerks because they said that who ever had the conch could speak then when piggy had the shell he was not allowed hi turn.
• the leaders are twisting and changing the rules around to meet their own benefits